One day at my house my brother was logging in to his blog..I asked him what it was.He said it was his blog.I asked my mom if i could have a blog.She said yes.So she set it up and I rote my first story.It was about a dog named Max.THE END
My sister Charlotte is new to the family.She was born on Febuary 22, 2012.Today she is 4 months old.When Charlotte is 1 year old i will be 8 years old.We dident go to the hospital with are mom and dad.So are neabores wached us.
One day while we were in New Mexico my dad was opening the door when he heard a squeak .He told us he heard somthing.He said he thouet it was a chipmunk.So we all went throuh the garage and my uncle opend the door and we paeked aroud and we saw the cutest thing that we had ever seen.It was a baby chipmunk.We all said ...ahhhhhhhhhhhh. THE END
Hi, Lucy.
ReplyDeleteI liked this a lot. It has an interesting beginning. You give good information in the middle. And the ending is good too.