One day at my house my brother was logging in to his blog..I asked him what it was.He said it was his blog.I asked my mom if i could have a blog.She said yes.So she set it up and I rote my first story.It was about a dog named Max.THE END
One day our freinds called us to ask a queshton.They wanted to know if we could wacth their dog Max.We had to wacth him for four days.Then somebody else would watch him.On our first day he was kind of roudi.On our second day we had lunch there.On our third day we took him on a walk.On our last day we stayed there for a long time.And we had lunch and dinner there.I brouht my picnic set and had dinner with it. The End
One day while we were in New Mexico my dad was opening the door when he heard a squeak .He told us he heard somthing.He said he thouet it was a chipmunk.So we all went throuh the garage and my uncle opend the door and we paeked aroud and we saw the cutest thing that we had ever seen.It was a baby chipmunk.We all said ...ahhhhhhhhhhhh. THE END
Hi, Lucy.
ReplyDeleteI liked this a lot. It has an interesting beginning. You give good information in the middle. And the ending is good too.