One day at my house my brother was logging in to his blog..I asked him what it was.He said it was his blog.I asked my mom if i could have a blog.She said yes.So she set it up and I rote my first story.It was about a dog named Max.THE END
One day while we were in New Mexico my dad was opening the door when he heard a squeak .He told us he heard somthing.He said he thouet it was a chipmunk.So we all went throuh the garage and my uncle opend the door and we paeked aroud and we saw the cutest thing that we had ever seen.It was a baby chipmunk.We all said ...ahhhhhhhhhhhh. THE END
Hi, Lucy.
ReplyDeleteI liked this a lot. It has an interesting beginning. You give good information in the middle. And the ending is good too.